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For a moment I held the afterglow
It soaked through my hands and my chest
A mournful goodbye to a night
That would not tolerate rest

Sleep would have liked to consume me
And torment my time to be sane
Storms twisting and eyes in the distance
Are the inhabitants of my slumbering brain

The pillows and bedsheets pity me
My pulse grows weaker each day
The comforting glow before morning
Will scare all my demons away



Perhaps I deserve all this trouble
Perhaps everything will be fine
But even if sleep's not the gift for me
The afterglow will always be mine
©2004-2009 ~sexypenguin
:iconsexypenguin:

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written during an eerie sunrise after a sleepless night.

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:iconkeraff:
I love how your able to rhyme your poems and twist them into a masterpiece.

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Dont Mind me,
Im just insane.
:iconsexypenguin:
o.0 is it really that good?

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"Never eat anything you find in a mirror." -Tom Robbins
:icongiustamagdalena:
i can relate top this on so many levels, this is a lovely inspiration, thank you.

beautiful composition and rhythm and the theme is deep and thought provoking.

really good.

+fav

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[i hate the way you hate me and i hate the way you care]
:iconkeraff:
To me, yes.

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Dont Mind me,
Im just insane.
:iconsexypenguin:
thank you so much :hug:

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"Never eat anything you find in a mirror." -Tom Robbins
:icongiustamagdalena:
=D

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[i hate the way you hate me and i hate the way you care]
:iconeverlyric:
I really

really

like this poem.

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www . TheBookofX . ca [link]
:iconsexypenguin:
aww thank you

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"Never eat anything you find in a mirror." -Tom Robbins
:iconbobbygroove:
whoa !
....i'm speechless...the best one on here so far...easily
pleasr write more...:hungry:

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"everything that shimmers is sure to fade away..."

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